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Really good :) I felt like I was reading the real thing haha like a real book and there were no awkward moments..like some times u read people's work and it just was written weird and amature.. this was good. I got a sense of olden day sailors for example I picture the main character looking like will turner or the new will in the last pirates movie..not sure if that's what u intended..but if I read the book from the start I would know what u meant.